Mostly this epilogue was written because I always wanted to see people's reactions at the end of Persuasion (the book). I mean, they tell you Sir. Walter's and Elizabeth's but nobody cares about them. I wrote the ones I care about. By which I mean Sophy Croft.

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Epilogue

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( And wtih this, the commentary comes to an end... )

Alright, my other favourite chapter of this fic. It’s all about this one and chapter 7.

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Chapter 13

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( Onto the resolution )

Hello everyone, welcome to the romance section of the fic. Always a bit of an issue for me, particularly with the J/L, although it is becoming less and less of an issue as I do it more. This one though, this one was intimidating. Because I had to adapt the letter. I always knew how I wanted the letter to come into play, but it was the writing ( Read more... )

Onto one of shorter chapters. In which I mostly tie up my case.

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Chapter 11

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( Commentary time! )

Here is Chapter 10, in which things get slowly better.

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Chapter 10

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( Click here to read my thoughts )

Apparently when I posted this chapter I was done the fic. That does not surprise me. I’d been way ahead of what I was posting, story-wise. I was a bit afraid of writing myself into a corner with the case. Which thankfully I managed not to do.

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Chapter 9

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( Click here for the first in a run of short-ish chapers )

Heh. And here is where the reviews started getting amusing. Because up until last chapter, everyone was all, “YEAH LISBON. Stupid dumb Jane.” Then last chapter I got a bunch of “Aww... Poor Jane.” And now I started getting a mix. I was amused. Very amused.

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Chapter 8

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( Click here for chapter 8 )

Alright, here we go, Chapter 7. Unsurprisingly, this one is a bit of a favourite of mine.

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Chapter 7

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( Let's all read my thoughts on the chapter where Jane finally gets a clue )

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Chapter 6

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( Here lies chapter 6... )

In which we head off to my equivalent of Lyme...

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Chapter 5

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( Onto the (rather-case-focused) chapter )